Austin
12/5/2012 12:51:53 am
If all the water evaurted I would not be happy. First of all you are problily going to need rain a lot. We are also going to need a gaint well. Teh last thing that we are going to need is something that is awesome and can hold alot of water.
Trevor King
12/5/2012 12:54:00 am
You have a point and you have to learn how to spell and we would ne a lot of rain.
Jamie Owen
12/5/2012 12:56:17 am
You need to check your spelling to Trevor.
sierra
12/5/2012 12:56:48 am
dont you meen need lots of water. trevor.
john C
12/5/2012 12:55:08 am
thats cool ustin good stroy
sierra
12/5/2012 12:58:57 am
learn how to spell peoples names. john.
jeremy
12/5/2012 12:55:22 am
I would but kind will austin. so i agree to this. bye austin.
zach
12/5/2012 12:59:07 am
I would get a umbrella. say that please dont drown.
alana
12/5/2012 12:59:20 am
a huge rain strom would come.
Jake Getman
12/5/2012 01:07:29 am
You have to learn to spell but good job on your story
christiana hunt
12/5/2012 01:17:29 am
I feel like you wrote 2 sentences with this, not that i am telling you to go over board like Jenna but you should express your true feeling. even what i am writing write now is better than what you wrote. Nice job but next time write more please.
brielyn
12/19/2012 08:47:29 am
i would feel the same way. it would be awful if all of the water evaporated.
jeremy
12/5/2012 12:53:22 am
It would be bad becuase you can't swim in the ocean and can't fish. Plus we might no have any water left. Plus who would like a empty ocean not me. so thats why its better on the erearth. who agrees.
Trevor King
12/5/2012 12:55:16 am
I agree that we couldent go fishing and couldent go swiming.
Jaime tarkkanen
12/5/2012 12:56:17 am
I agree too jeremy! It would really suck if ther were know oceans
sierra
12/5/2012 01:01:29 am
i agree with jeremy to.
john C
12/5/2012 12:58:21 am
that would suck but dont forget we couldint go tubbing
christiana hunt
12/5/2012 01:19:04 am
You used plus too much. You need to write more also. Other than that you did great
Jaime Tarkkanen
12/5/2012 12:53:29 am
If all the oceans evaporated, then fish wuold be extinked. and all the whales and sea lfe would die. the dolfins would die all along with the rest of the ocean. It would be terrible if that happened. just terriblle.
jeremy
12/5/2012 12:56:53 am
that is a nice story jaime.
Jamie Owen
12/5/2012 12:57:30 am
Well that was a depressing story Jamie T.
Joe
12/5/2012 12:58:57 am
You are right Jamie poor whales
laura munn
12/5/2012 01:01:43 am
That would be sad cause i love to fish!
Jarrod Verburg
12/5/2012 01:17:50 am
You spelt would wrong jamie T. You did not captileize and at the beging of a new sentence. Just terible is not a complete sentence.
john conwell
12/5/2012 12:54:14 am
if the ocean had ivaparated it would be so scary. Beacuse we could not go swimming or tubing and we could not wush our clothes. It would be horrible beacuse no one would beable to be clean beacuse there would be no water. and the world would be really stinky and every thing would get all wered. and the most inportint reasin is we would die beacuse were made 90 persent of water.
alana
12/5/2012 12:54:29 am
If the water evaprated in the ocean a lot of life will die. There whod be more land than water. Animals would go to extenchen. Water would coust more. The world would not be the same with out the ocean.
Jamie Owen
12/5/2012 12:59:28 am
First of all check your spelling second I agree Alana.
Jamie Owen
12/5/2012 12:54:47 am
If the ocean evaporated it would be a disaster. no one would live without the water because we would die of thirst. All the fish would live on land and talk that would scare me.Then we would have to invent artifical water and that would be weird. and sharks would take over the world. And that is what would happen if the ocean evaporated.
john
12/5/2012 12:55:58 am
thats really funny and cool jamie nice stroy
alana
12/5/2012 12:57:14 am
there are lakes and rivers.
sierra
12/5/2012 12:55:01 am
if the ocean evaporated i would freek. it would be horrible all the fish and animals would die. Because they would need water. if they died i would cry. i would wish they wouldn't die. it would be so horible.
jenna Fisher
12/5/2012 12:56:07 am
If all of the the water in the ocean was gone, there would be no dolphins and no sharks, and other animals that live in the oceans. if there were no water I would die because of no dolhins would be alive no more. I would also be mad because then when I go to Florida I would never beable to go down to the beach and swim. I wold also hate it because my grandma would not get flipped over in the canou. that was so funny.She went to take a picture of a dolhin and it went under her and flipped over. we always call the dolphin flipper, because it flipped her. Get flipper. I will be happy because ther would be no more sharks to eat me alive, but they could not eat me because I would not be in the water because there would not be any. Duh.
jenna Fisher
12/5/2012 12:59:14 am
That is so funny people why are you not replying!!!!!
laura munn
12/5/2012 01:00:15 am
long story jenna fisher lol i do not know why i just used you're last name
Brielyn
12/5/2012 01:01:00 am
Jenna, that was sooo amazing. I loved the part were you get to flip a conoe with your grandma init. Nice job Jenna.
christiana hunt
12/5/2012 01:09:03 am
omg jenna. you dont have to write a book. jese
Cesar Martinez
12/5/2012 01:14:19 am
I would be sad too because there will be no more water. Also because I love going to the beach with my family. I will also be happy because of no sharks.
laura munn
12/5/2012 12:56:23 am
If the ocean evapourated i would go insaine. i wouldnt ever be able to go swiming again in the ocean. that would be so sad. for manny people but it would be good in a way. we couuld actually catch alot of fish befor they die.
jeremy
12/5/2012 12:58:04 am
i would go insane to laura
camron biron
12/5/2012 12:57:09 am
if all the water evaporated from the ocean we could not drink. Also we could not eat fish and because fish is my favorite i would go crazy. also i would be starving.
Brielyn
12/5/2012 12:57:15 am
If the ocean evaporated i would not be happy. if would be so sad to see everything vanish. all the water would vanish, All the sea animals would die and so would the pants and other things that live in there. Plus, i wouldn't even get to swim in the ocean and i wouldn't get to explore the ocean. I would also think if the ocean evaporated it would be really cool. You would get to see the ocean and not go into the water to see the ocean. That is what would happen if the ocean evaporated.
Joe
12/5/2012 01:00:15 am
very long pragraph
Cesar Martinez
12/5/2012 01:08:47 am
I would be sad and happy at the same time. I would be sad because fish will die and so will people. I feel happy because I can no longer drown.
Kathryn
12/5/2012 01:09:40 am
That was a really good story.Bree I loved the part when you said that we will not get to swim in the ocean. Nice job Bree
Jarrod Verburg
12/5/2012 01:14:53 am
You need to capitilize Brielyn and I would be sad and happy. I would be sad because all of the people would die. I would be happy because I would not have to swim any more.
Joe
12/5/2012 12:57:44 am
If all the water evaporated got evaporated from the ocean I would think of all of the poor fish and wails that did not get a chance to live. All of the people that were on a boat thinking the only that would be bad is getting run over by a blue wail. I would be very mad because if the water went up it will come back down which means no playing outside. Then I would realize The continents are floating so I would leave.
jenna Fisher
12/5/2012 01:01:20 am
I agree but read mine yours kind of relates to mine. My grand ma got tiped over.
Brady Ginger Burnell
12/5/2012 01:06:45 am
Hahaha funny joe Good job!.
Brady Ginger Burnell
12/5/2012 01:00:54 am
If all the oceans water evaporated I would go discover all the area for the Titanic and othor lost items. It would take a while but i would suceed. I would freak out because we wold probably run out of water. That means no water no dairy, no dairy no food, no food starving, starving, tired, tired, sick, sick=dead.I hope the ocean does not evaporate!
brielyn
12/5/2012 01:04:26 am
that would amazing. iwth you brady. i would do the same thing you do. nice job brady.
Karsen Tackett
12/5/2012 01:10:32 am
Dont be telling me how to spell Brady
Cesar Martinez
12/5/2012 01:16:26 am
I would go try and find the titanic too. Also I will find other lost items from other lost ships. Every one can also die of thirst and I will be so sad.
Trevor King
12/5/2012 01:01:00 am
If the ocean evaporated it would be a disaster. All the fish and water animals would die. And ther would be no one swiming at the beach. There would not be any water for people to drink. There also wouldent be no fisherman. That is what would happen if the oceans evaporated.
alana
12/5/2012 01:03:18 am
there are still lakes and rivers.
Kathryn
12/5/2012 01:05:14 am
Trev, that is soo true. the ocean would be a huge disaster. Nice job Trev.
Kathryn Dekker
12/5/2012 01:01:21 am
If the ocean evaporated, that would be so cool and not cool' beceuse we can see all of the ugly fish fly out of the water and die.You can also see all of the water just be blank there would be sand. Other reason it would not be cool becuse then we would not be able to get to an other state. We cannot have fun with are family either. So how about you how do you fell about the ocean evaporated.
Jenna fisher
12/5/2012 01:03:29 am
That would be so cool. But what do I mean and do you want to come to my house.
brielyn
12/5/2012 01:07:38 am
i sooo agree. that would be so cool to travel to another country. great jod kat
Cesar Martinez
12/5/2012 01:04:44 am
If all of the oceans evaporated people will not have any water to hydrate them and people will be dehydrated. There will be no more swimming since there is no more water. People can not go to beaches since there is no water. All of the fish would die and people who like fish will never eat fish again. The population will get lower and lower since there is no water to get them wet and hydrate them. Animals would die too because everybody and everything will need water to survive. Everybody will be thirsty and people will probably pay alot of money for a bottle of water if someone had a full bottle of water. There will now be 100% of land. People will die and it could be the end of the world unless people found water. Thet is what I think would happen if the oceans evaporated.
Kathryn
12/5/2012 01:12:48 am
Cesar that was a really good story. I loved that it was so long. Good job Cesar.,
Jarrod Verburg
12/5/2012 01:21:58 am
No errors Cesar that is very good. You had very good detalis and the sentences where very big. Your story was very good and detalis.
Jake Getman
12/5/2012 01:05:33 am
If all the oceans in the world evaporated I would be able to go to the lowest point on the Earth. There would be tons of new cities. Probably since they have so much space it would be the biggest city ever. And the rest of the everybody's lives would be in rain because the water would have to come down sometime.
Brady Ginger Burnell
12/5/2012 01:09:57 am
5 sentences!!!!!!!!
Karsen Tackett
12/5/2012 01:05:54 am
If all the water in the ocean evapurated i would be scared. I would be scared that i would drown in salt water. I would go to and ocean and see th titanic. we wouldnt have to worry about hurricanes. and last but not least we woulnt drowned!
frank
12/5/2012 01:09:49 am
If the ocean's evaporated that would be really bad!! Because the fish and the sharks would be out of the water. And they would attack you if you get close. There would be big fish and they will all die after a day. And that is what i thank would happen!!
David Stiles
12/5/2012 01:16:01 am
I for got about the fish and stuff. I'll just pull all 'em big ones out with a 4x4, no?
Jarrod Verburg
12/5/2012 01:10:07 am
If water was evaporated it would not be good. I would not like it because the water in the ocean makes purified water. We need lots water to be healthy. If we did't have any water we would get sick alot. We woud not live.
David Stiles
12/5/2012 01:10:18 am
If the ocean evaporated, I would ride down on a quad and use the floor as a sand drag for ATVs, UTVs cars, trucks, and 3-wheelers. Any vehicle any one could think of! 1st one to the Titanic and back wins. I would have it flattened after every 10 races. I would have Obama put a gas station in for the 2,3,and 4 wheelers for thier runs. No charge . Just gas up and go. That is what I would do if the ocean evaporated.
laura munn
12/5/2012 01:14:53 am
Thats just weird david
christiana hunt
12/5/2012 01:14:02 am
What would happen if the all the oceans evaporated. Well if the water evaporated, there would be no oceans no dolphins or sharks and alien life form would emidietly take over the world with a crash and a boom. I would get no water to drink no crops to eat only the water that i pee out would be what i drink. Yuck. i would hate that. That is what would happen if all the oceans evaporated.
laura munn
12/5/2012 01:16:54 am
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